In order to continue filming and producing the trailer we need to get feedback on what we have done so far. This will help us be guided in the right direction and enable us to amend our work so far according to the response from our target audience.
The first person said that the background noises at the start during the phone call were too much. we plan to change it to either silent or have quiet suspense sound effects. She also commented on how we spent an unnecessary amount of time of the detective on the toilet so we will cut out the last part where he pulls his trousers up. We have filmed some flashback clips which have been placed at the end of this draft. We have not yet edited them but we will make them a main part of the trailer and possibly open up the trailer. The third person pointed out how we had not added any British certification at the start or added any credits to the end. He also pointed out that the car scenes in the montage were a bit too long and not fast paced enough so we will look into cutting them down. The fourth person pointed out how we don't really have any act 2 yet so the middle section of the trailer is missing as at the moment it cuts from the opening to the end montage.
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